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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 19, 2011 10:25:00 GMT -5
I will be posting more excerpts from my novels in my progress thread soon for everyone to read and comment on.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 19, 2011 10:48:14 GMT -5
I hope to post excerpts after writing more words in each of the chapters inside each of my novels soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 19, 2011 15:32:16 GMT -5
I will be posting excerpts from my novels between breaks from reading my writing book and watching Spiderwick Chronicles.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 19, 2011 17:33:29 GMT -5
Here is an excerpt from A Bloody Chrysanthemum... Chrysanta Anna Abbay is walking along the sidewalk hearing catcalls. With whispers not caring how the way she looks or with the way, she dresses as she passes by everyone on the sidewalk on her way to work. At the local strip club as a bartender/dancer for the night and midnight hours. Chrysanta continued to walk along the evening sidewalk crossing the street heading straight for Midnight Enchantment strip club. She waved to the bouncer who is her long time friend named Jim as she walked past him into the club to go to the lockers. Where the other dancers, bartenders, waitresses, and waiters are in dressing in their uniforms she arrived at her locker opened it up with a key she has at her wrist. Chrysanta takes out her uniform and changes in front of everyone not caring one thing about anything they will say to her. From the way, everyone who works at the club thinks of each other as family and friends for years. Chrysanta walked out of the lockers with everyone of the workers following her. As she with one of her co-workers walks straight to the bar to go behind it and be ready for their stations to take people’s orders. The club opens up for everyone to come into for the night and midnight hour where everyone to give her and Mike drink orders to fill up for the rest of the evening and night hours. Chyrsanta looked at the entrance to the club as her boss looked at her from the other side of the club coming out of his office in lust and attraction to her. With him already knows she is his favorite dancer and bartender but has never given him a chance to ask him out. Chrysanta looks from the entrance to across the room in the club. After feeling eyes on her, she found out to be her boss she tolerates because of her job and does not really like him at all. Because of him being perverted at her every time she comes into work and is in either her uniform or costume in the club she has worked in since she first started at eighteen years old. Chrysanta first sees some early regulars come in for their drinks to be handed to them, as she knew what already some of the men knew what they wanted already. Chrysanta knew she did not want them complaining about the drinks not being to their liking. Chrysanta stayed away until they called her for something else. That she let her good friend Mike take care of them for her not counting while stifling a laugh noticing his name is kind of like the liquor bottle they serve at the bar. Chrysanta notices the men looking at her with lust as she stiffens and decides to ignore what they will say to her to have her attention on them. Chrysanta watches as Mike takes their orders and hands them out to the men who now turned to Mike, with a weird look. Chrysanta knew she has to help Mike with the men even with the men ogling her and giving her lustful looks which made her shudder in disgust from the men looking at her that way. Chrysanta knew she has to work hard at having everything set out for her. In one way or another for she knows she will anything to make sure her love for dancing and bartending will make her happy. And not have to feel degraded or having anyone touch her unless she lets them either. Chrysanta wanted to help Mike out with the drinks for the men she noticed the stress he has on himself felt sorry for him as she walks to his side.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 19, 2011 20:05:16 GMT -5
I will be posting another excerpt from one of my novels soon. After I am finished with each chapter after writing more words in them.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 20, 2011 10:55:40 GMT -5
I hope to post more excerpts today in the morning. Since I did not do it last night.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 20, 2011 14:35:39 GMT -5
I will post excerpts from my novels in my progress thread soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 20, 2011 16:31:10 GMT -5
I will be writing more words in each of my novels. Within finishing each chapter in each of them too.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 20, 2011 16:43:26 GMT -5
I will be posting excerpts from my novels later in this afternoon for everyone to read soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 20, 2011 18:21:36 GMT -5
I will be working on more words to be finished with each chapter. In each of them soon. As I finished writing each novel.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 21, 2011 0:14:14 GMT -5
I hope to post another excerpt or two from my novels in my progress thread soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 22, 2011 21:04:49 GMT -5
I will be writing more words in each of my novels including my Nano to be finished with it and edit and rewrite it soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 12:00:03 GMT -5
Well, I am at 80.3k in my Nano novel that I tend to finish at 150k soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 12:19:33 GMT -5
I am at 80.5k in my Nano novel now. I will be writing more words to be at 83k - 89k and higher words after that for today in the morning.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 12:55:52 GMT -5
I have 81k words into my Nano novel. I will plan on writing more words to be at 83k through 89k and higher words for today in my Nano novel for this morning.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 13:04:05 GMT -5
I will write more words in each of my novels to be in higher words. I will post more excerpts from each of my novels in my progress thread soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 13:51:38 GMT -5
I am at 81.1k now and I hope to be at 83k through 89k and higher words soon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 16:17:26 GMT -5
I will post more excerpts soon. After I write more words in each of my novels to have each chapter in each of them finished.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 16:18:45 GMT -5
I am at 83k now in my Nano novel. Yet, I will continue to write more words to try to be at 85k through 89k. Along with more higher words past that in my Nano novel today in the afternoon.
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Post by marielaurent2221 on Nov 23, 2011 22:12:52 GMT -5
Well, I am at 89k words into my Nano novel. I plan on being at 93k through 99k and higher words after that in my novel for tonight and in the early morning hours.
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