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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 8, 2011 10:47:14 GMT -5
I would have to say about myself would be that I have been writing since 2007-2010-2011 of this year, since I was a teenager!
I love writing and reading since I was a little girl, I am in college, and I will continue to write for this year and post excerpts and summaries to my novels soon here.
My writing goals will have to be for 50k-100k for this year and this month for the upcoming months too!
Everyone can call me Marie even since my User name is marielaurent2223, and I would not mind if anyone called me Marie either since I respond to that.
My writing WIPS will be for this year is also in my WIP list too!
The Demon Dilemma this a WIP that has a paranormal/fantasy/romance/drama/action!
but I will be writing this one in a outline before starting the novel of it soon!
Alien Love: about a Alien named Robin with her companion and best friend Lila who after Robin gets captured by the military and taken a white room on the base which the military base is kind of like Area 51 though, but she soon finds love in Commander Grant.
I am on chapter 10 of this novel but will work more towards more chapters for this year to post here, as well as the excerpts to this one and my other novels in my progress rambling thread soon!
C-1-E-6: a robot/human fantasy/scifi/action/drama type of novel which I am on the prologue of it but will work towards having chapter 1 and more chapters to this novel soon!
Loving the color of purple: this is a scifi/romance/drama/action/adventure/fantasy.
my other writing goals is to continue writing chapters to my novels since even I just named a few there will be more novels and short stories, and the very first story I started on was a inuyasha/charmed crossover which it is about the three girls from inuyasha take over the charmed ones position!
which has action/drama/violence/romance/angst!
I hope to post excerpts and update this soon for this year before the month of march ends, I love being a crazy club member, and being a co-author partner to Mars too!
I started Septnowrimo Gothnowrimo Scifiwrimo, and nanofimo, and for this year I joined Nanowrimo 2011, Marnowrimo, Jannowrimo 2011, Febnowrimo 2011, and Crazy Club, besides joining April fools writing month, JulNoWriMo 2011, WriDamNoInJune, Maynowrimo, Decnowrimo, Septnowrimo, Gothnowrimo Scifiwrimo, Noveldom and beyond, Nepmo I think I signed up for others but I cannot remember right now!
I hope to reach more word counts for 50k-100k for each month soon!
if you guys have anymore questions about me and want to get to know just PM me OK.
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Post by Louisa on Mar 8, 2011 19:30:20 GMT -5
Hi Marie! And I love how the thing that I changed, how mem're (put a "b" in the place of the "'" changed to member! It's funny And good luck with your goals, and your books sound interesting!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 14, 2011 16:53:44 GMT -5
My Excerpt of one of my novels for today, called Alien Love!
Robin was walking along the streets in a town, she was now in, and looked all around at all the humans that passed by her and were staring at her wondering if Robin was new in town or not.
with having them wonder, if Robin was friendly to talk to and get to know because all of them found her strange and different in the town they were in.
She turned her head away from the people and continued walking while it looked like the townspeople seemed to admire the way she walked. and how she looked different from them and carried herself different in town and wondered if she was staying here or just passing by and moving on.
Soon all the people continued walking on and going back to do their own things while Robin continued walking while wishing she had someone help her find the perfect home.
With wondering if someone she hoped would love her, and would want to be with her for forever and eternity because she would not feel lonely or be lonely anymore for the matter in her lifer if she has someone to love her in return.
Robin was still walking with her companion through the town when she was suddenly grabbed from behind screaming while someone held a hand over her mouth.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 14, 2011 17:37:26 GMT -5
I hope to post another entry in my PPT with no words messing up soon!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 14, 2011 19:01:33 GMT -5
With the first excerpt I hope everyone will like the excerpt that I post since this is my first try.
At posting my first excerpt to one of my novels called Alien Love, and I will post more excerpts soon before it becomes night here where I live!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 14, 2011 21:04:11 GMT -5
My second excerpt that is Loving the color of purple which is the prologue to my novel!
Karen was in one of the rooms of her house, attending to the injured, that her parents wanted her to do.
With Karen Not knowing what is going to happen in store for her, and what is expected for her soon.
When Karen suddenly heard an explosion outside of the house, followed by more, and what sounded like screaming coming from her mother and other women.
Karen knew after she took care of her last patient that she will have to check to see if anything is out of the ordinary. Like she has been taught for years to check the surrounding areas. Where the people are including her parents and fight if she has too to protect her people.
Karen went out of the medical room to see what’s wrong, what’s causing everyone to scream, and panic.
What Karen found was something out of the ordinary it was a group of men trying to take down her and her family’s home that they were living in and the bombs were getting louder and hitting pieces of her home.
Karen went into a fighting stance, and went to go into the fight and protect her, as well as her parents, and everybody else that was in it.
Karen knew what she had to do, even if she didn’t like it, she used one of her powers as a goddess, and took down half the men but not before some of the men killed and injured half the people including her parents.
Karen was sad, but knew she couldn’t deal with it right now, she had to take care of the rest of the men, that were trying to get into her home and hurt the people she is trying to protect and care for.
Not knowing that the damage to her home was worse. In addition, even after she fought, she still lost half of the amount of more people she had to protect, and care for. Karen did not want to cry right this second but as soon as all the rest of the men were gone and dead, all she had left was the leader of his group.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 14, 2011 21:04:56 GMT -5
hope I did this excerpt to my prologue to my novel correctly for everyone to read, and like if they read it!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 15, 2011 17:20:22 GMT -5
my third excerpt for today is the prologue to my C-1-E-6 novel hope everyone likes it as much as I have written it!
I was walking down the streets of a town, I knew nothing of; and was feeling lost, since I have been in this town, with the clothes on my back, and a long jacket, along with something that I could not remember was mine, but it was I guess.
I didn’t know where to go so I just continued down the streets looking at the places that passed me by as I continued to walk and watched in suspicion of anyone looking at me at nighttime.
Until I almost collapsed and someone grabbed me from behind and was holding me I tried looking up but I was so exhausted that I couldn’t see very well as to who was holding me and keeping me upright.
I fell asleep and the next thing I wake up and I’m in someone’s home and in a bedroom sitting halfway up in the bed wondering where I was.
I went to find someone that I could ask to find out who they are and why they wanted to help me and where was the stuff that was supposedly mine.
I stood up from the bed and left the bedroom and walked down the halls where I started to hear noises.
I heard two people talking in hushed conversations I wondered if one of those people was the one that grabbed me and brought me here and let me sleep in this place and I wondered where here was for that matter and if someone will tell me about it.
I peeked into the room in one of the parts of the halls to find a man talking with another man possibly about me from what they arguing about and wondered if I was the cause of the argument or something worse.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 15, 2011 20:51:33 GMT -5
I hope everyone can look at my PPT soon and comment when in post another excerpt again!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 15, 2011 21:00:58 GMT -5
Excerpt from my Love for a Second Chance prologue!
Eve was at the library with her friends when she had to get home in case her dad and mom throw a fit because she was home late.
Eve told her friends “Sorry guys I got to go home you know how my mom and dad are right you’ve seen them!" "I don’t want them to have a cow because I’m late so see you guys either later or tomorrow!"
Her friends nodded and after she left them she was walking the sidewalk away from the library to find short cut to get to her house.
When she found one that could get to her house quicker she went through it and got to her house faster than she ever believed possible.
Eve arrived at her house eve went to find the key underneath the flower pot and just as Eve is about to use it she decided to test out to see if the door was unlocked and to head inside her house.
When Eve opened her front door to her and her family’s home she wondered where her parents were because usually both of her parents will wait on her until she comes home.
Eve called out “Mom dad are you here is anyone home I’m home mom and dad if this is a joke its not funny where are you guys”, she walked farther in her home after closing the door.
With all the lights out Eve realized it was storming she walked farther until she slipped on something wet she looked at her hand to find it to be a dark liquid that was on her hand she crawled to wherever it was and found her mom on the floor bleeding everywhere.
Eve panicked she was beginning to cry when she put her in her arms and said"Mother mommy please be alright please open your eyes to me please don’t be gone mom I miss you please open your eyes mommy please”.
By now Eve had tears fully coming out of her eyes and falling down her face and onto her mother’s Eve looked at her and said while rocking her mother in her arms “Please mom wake up don’t die on me please wake up I need you mom please”.
Eve was with her mother still she suddenly heard a noise and she wondered if she should investigate it and try to find her dad to make sure he is alright.
Eve gently put her mother back down on the floor and got up from being on her knees and walked to where the noise was getting louder when she heard a noise like a bullet coming out of the gun she walked slowly and silently to find out what was happening.
Eve went to the door to the kitchen and silently opened it and stepped in, what she found was a man who she recognized as her uncle with blood all over him and a gun raised at her dad again.
Eve looked at her dad and saw that he was covered in blood all over his chest and the floor, she said “Oh My God Dad!”
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 17, 2011 19:24:18 GMT -5
My word counts for each of my novels is... 21,301, 3,712, 18,442, 2,192, and I will post more excerpts to my other novels including ones I will be still working on along with word counts too!
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Post by Louisa on Mar 17, 2011 23:13:16 GMT -5
GOGOGOGOGOGO!!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 18, 2011 14:30:01 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply Louisa, I will continue to go and write my novels to finish them soon for novel swap and more excerpts.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 18, 2011 14:32:30 GMT -5
Here is an excerpt from one of my new novels Harming The Innocent!
Late in the night, a young man is running out of the house into the parking lot trying to arrive at his car from being chased by someone behind him to try to unlock his car.
While to be in it quickly and drive away not knowing the person behind him who wants to attack him is gaining closer and closer to him.
Just as he is arriving close to his car, someone with a knife comes up behind him and grabs from behind covering his mouth so he will not scream.
The person stabbed him in the heart through his back, until the young man went limp in the person’s arms.
The person pulled the knife out of the young man’s chest dropped him on the ground in front of his car, and said, “That’s what you get for having the girl reject me Mark!”
After the person said that to the victim, he walked back the way he came whistling an old tune with a smile on his face waiting for the day he would finally have the girl he has dreamed of having for so long without worrying about having anyone be in his way…
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 19, 2011 12:12:19 GMT -5
I hope to reply more to my progress soon and update my progress soon, before long and before March is over!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 19, 2011 15:43:00 GMT -5
Here is another Excerpt of my new novel Harming the Innocent this time from chapter 1!
1 year later…
Tracy Drake read the newspaper of how one of those crazy people hurt and killed somebody for the how many times in the news the people write about and put in the newspaper.
Tracy just thought of them as crazy including someone who is psycho who still likes to hurt people for no darn reason.
Tracy decided to just, watch TV for now after she threw the newspaper on the counter and went straight towards the living room where she heard the TV already on, and wondered which one of her friends she lived with is watching on TV.
Tracy looked into the living room and saw her friend Justine is watching the same news she just read about in the newspaper the reporters just put in there.
Tracy sighed with rolling her eyes and then walked straight towards the couch to ask her friend Justine what type of news she is watching on TV even if she already knew the answer she just wanted to hear her friend say what she is watching on TV.
Her friend Justine looked at her smiled, and said, “Well Tracy I am watching something about the recent news they have on!” “Which to me surprises to me why they would not show any of the evidence the police, have on the news!” “From some crazy psychopath who is on a rampage or something you know!” “But yet, this news just interests me with you knowing being a trainee in the law force field at school!” “Where I can actually graduate to become a police officer you know!” “Once my professors hand me the degree for it though which sucks cause I cannot know too many details on investigations like these do you not think these are interesting to know about Tracy!”
Tracy looked towards her friend Justine and said, “Yes the news does seem interesting to watch but is this alright if I would like to watch something else Justine!”
Justine looked towards her smiled and handed the remote over towards her friend and said, “Sure you can watch something on TV I was becoming bored anyways after a while of watching the news!”
Tracy watched as her friend Justine handed her the remote and left to go to the kitchen to find something to eat and drink for lunch from the fridge both share with the other two roommates who are their friends who live with them in the same apartment all four shared together.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 19, 2011 15:45:33 GMT -5
Hope everyone likes my new novel Harming the Innocent's excerpt of ch. 1 since I will be working more on my novel and posting more excerpts from each of my novels. As I complete each chapter from each of my novels and once their complete I will post my novel in the novel swaps thread soon!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 19, 2011 17:17:32 GMT -5
Here is another Excerpt this time from Paper Cut Desire!
Lauren was working in her bedroom doing her homework when all of a sudden she got tired and was about to move away from her work.
When she cut herself with one of her papers, she said to herself “ouch that hurt now what am I going to do I may have to fix this up so it doesn’t bleed too much”.
After Lauren said that she heard knocking noise coming to her window that sounded like a tapping noise she went straight towards her window to look down she opened nothing was there she closed it and turned to find her childhood friend looking at her with a lustful hungry look.
Lauren wondered why he had that look when he said to her “If you want I can lick that and it will be all better and it will also be better if you will be my bride as well!"
Lauren looked at him and wondered what his problem was when all of a sudden he took her hand and brought her hand to his mouth. He licked her finger with her closing her eyes relishing the feeling and not realizing that as soon as he was done he was looking at her.
When Lauren opened her eyes she looked at him and wondered why he did that when she said to him “Why did you do that to my hand I could of took care of it with water and soap and a band aid over it!"
Her friend said to her “Well it’s too late for that now because if you look at your hand its already healed!" "By the way if you say my name out loud when you’re in trouble I will come sand save you alright!"
Lauren nodded her head yes at his answer then after wards he left her and flew out the window of her bedroom with her staying behind watching him from a far.
Lauren knew she loved him but does he truly love her for her or is it some game that he is playing with her to get her to like him and even love him too.
Lauren went back to her desk and went back to do her homework and try not to think anymore about him for right now until she thinks about him when she goes to sleep.
The next morning she gets ready to go to school, after putting her homework that she finished in her messenger bag and headed to school.
Since her school is a few blocks away and she liked to walk there from her home and she wanted to get their early before all the other students got there.
Once Lauren arrived at school she went straight to her class and sat down in her seat after opening the door, and waited for school to start and for the teacher to come in as well as the rest of the students who are in her class that she is now in.
When everyone was in the class and the teacher came in and class was about to start their was music.
Then the speaker on the intercom announced that a new student was being sent to the school wondering who the new student was coming to their school.
Lauren wondered who it was until when the door to the classroom opened and she saw her childhood friend appear in the classroom doorway. Lauren watched as he went up to the teacher and gave her the note stating he is allowed in this class.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 19, 2011 17:18:47 GMT -5
Hope I posted the Excerpt correctly since I had the inspiration from the Anime graphic novel Black Bird which is a really great Anime Graphic novel to read!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Mar 19, 2011 19:27:12 GMT -5
My word count for this evening for one of my novels is,1,382 but I will post more word counts besides more of this word count for my novels and other novels series, besides short stories too!
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